After receiving feedback from our teacher we realised that there was still a lot we needed to change and include.
The first thing we obviously needed to change was to include more sound and make our cuts cleaner.
We decided on a backing score throughout the piece until the end scene.
We also changed the effect and added crossfades to our scene cuts to make them appear smoother.
We made the light out side darker when he is returning in his car to make it clear to the audience that it was a different time of day.
Lastly, we added a fade to black to stop the possibility that the viewer might stop the clip before watching the end.
Our film Straight Outta New Orleans is named this because we tried to cram all of the information about the family, straight outta; leaving new Orleans, on the run, criminal minds.